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雅思高分写作的要求 做到这几个点就不难了

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很多时候考生考到题目没有自己的想法,即使知道如何行文,但不知道如何下笔。 主要是学生上完课后不能有效完成作业,没有及时把学过的知识复习记住 。

至于雅思写作中没有思路不知如何下笔的问题,老师会带领学员对范文进行分析。 并在课后布置相关范文分析和写作练习,争取让学员对雅思考试每一个话题都熟记于心,有针对性地准备就会避免学生出现相关题目没有思路的问题。再者课后不知道如何复习,比如说老师给的范文应该如何运用 。

首先看范文时,画出你个人认为重点的知识,不要画单词,写作较小的单位是短语。不要觉得能看懂就能写出来,一定要问问自己,我会的东西是否写得出来。如果觉得自己写不出来,就果断画出重点。

再者,总结句式,画完零碎的词汇表达,一定要注意句式的表达,我们了解的几大句式必须要反复记忆,这样在考试中才活学活用。 那么我们基本可以完成考试要求的任务 。

写作要想取得,突破基础分数六分,应该做到以下要求

写作的要求

评分标准:

Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构)

Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证,论点和论据)

Communicative Quality(交流质量)

首先看Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构)

1. 避免使用过于低级的单词

比如The problem becomes worse by the poor effects we made.

虽然也能正确表达意思,只是大家记住写作是书面语,用词尽量学术一些所以这句话我们可以改为

The problem was compounded due to the ineffective measures we had taken.

再比如说 bad results.

我们可以改为 dire consequences

以下词可以供大家参考,far-reaching(深远的), profound(深刻的), adverse(不利的), catastrophic(灾难的), damaging(破坏性的), devastating(破坏性的), dire(可怕的), disastrous(灾难的), fatal(致命的), tragic(悲惨的), severe(严重的)

2. 避免过分重复同一样的单词

也就是要做到同义转换

比如Mothers enjoy the same right for career advancement as fathers do.

Mothers are just as entitled to career advancement as fathers.

Mothers are empowered to career advancement as fathers.

3. 尽可能展示多变的句型

定语从句:

China is the largest developing country and is enjoying rapid economic growth. As a result, in the streets of major cities in China, there are thousands of vehicles of all kinds.

这是由两个简单句构成,我们可以写成复合句

As the largest developing country, China is enjoying rapid economic growth, the evidence of which can be seen in all major cities whose streets are teeming with thousands of vehicles of all kinds.

倒装句:

Young people are so impulsive and easily influenced that they are constantly tricked by advertisement in all forms of media.

可以改为Impulsive and easily influenced as young people are, they are constantly tricked by advertisement in all forms of media.

伴随状语:

It is common now for kids to spend six and a half days in school each week because they have to sit through one extra class after another. 可以写成It is common for kids to spend six and a half days in school each week, sitting through one extra class after another.

再者,对于Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证,论点和论据)的要求

作文两个注意事项:

1. 论据尽可能新颖:论据新颖,文字才更有可能新颖

2. 新颖应该让位于准确性:确保文字没有错误

Communicative Quality(交流质量)

1. 作文,在于文字和论据精彩,不在于结构另类

2. 雅思作文类型固定,写作模式也固定,作文亦然

满足以上要求,并且做到不能跑题。一旦跑题,可能5分都非常难,4.5分是经常见到的分数。其次,增加论点的论证能满足基本的逻辑,论证要充分。较后,不能出现太多的语法错误,确保句子的准确性。

下边,给大家列一列考生作文中的常见语法错误及犯错的原因。

1. The quantity of women workers keep stable from 1985 to 1990.

这个句子是小作文数据图中学生所写。此句明显有两个错误,一个是时态错误。小作文中如果数据是过去的,要采用一般过去时,所以此处要用kept.。第二个是动词keep形式不对,这句话的主语是quantity。时态错误和主谓不一致是雅思考试写作和口语较常见的语法错误。

2. With developing of economy,the environment had deteriorated.

这里用了一个with 介词+名词短语,想表达伴随的概念。但是大家要牢记介词后边可以加名词、名词短语、动名词,构成介词短语以便做状语或者定语。但是developing of economy词性有问题。A of B是常见的表示所属的名词短语格式,翻译成B的A, 这里要求A和B必须都是名词。而developing 是形容词性质,所以应该改为 with the development of economy。同样,我们还可以把with替换成as, 但是值得注意的是as 是连词,连词后边要加句子,所以可以写成as the economy develops。

3. Playing computer games waste parents’ hard-earned money.

这句话是经典的主谓不一致的错误。主句是playing computer games 动名词做主语,所以谓语动词要用单数加s。在写一个现在时的句子时,一定要注意主谓一致问题。主语是否是可数名词单数、不可数名词、动名词、不定式或是句子。如果是,并且句子中又没有使用情态动词,谓语动词要加s。

4. There are many people believe studying abroad is a good choice.

这句话之所以这样写,都是受汉语语意的影响。那“有”在英文中我们用there be/ have 都是动词概念,所以造成句子多谓语动词,这里的are/ believe/ is都是动词,但是句子believe 后边是个宾语从句,明显动词多了。

5. Government should take immediate measures to protect our environment.

可数名词不能单独使用。这里government 是可数名词,所以在句子中要么用governments, 要么特指the government。

6. University students receive training on job-related skills is necessary.

又是一句读起来朗朗上口,受汉语语意影响的句子。这个句子中有receive 和is 两个动词,但是没有涉及到从句。university students receive training on job-related skills 已经是个完整的句子,所以要用形式主语从句 it is necessary that university students receive training on job-related skills.

7. The number of female students in this university is higher than male students.

比较成份要一致。这句前边主语是the number, 后边比较对象是male students,所以正确的方式是The number of female students in this university is higher than the number of male students. 或者The number of female students in this university is higher than that of male students.

8. Newspapers exert such tremendous influence that they cannot only bring about major changes to the lives of ordinary people but to the government’s decision.

Both ...and/ not only…but also/ A and B都属于并列结构,前后连接成份要一致。这句not only 后边是动词短语,but后确是to the government’s decision。所以我们可以改成Newspapers exert such tremendous influence that they cannot only bring about major changes to the lives of ordinary people but affect the government’s decision。

9. Although teenagers may be included in family decisions, but they are not ultimately responsible.

这个句子的错误在雅思口语中经常见到,也是受汉语语意影响,但是在英语中although和but都是连词,在句子中只能有一个。同样because和so也是一个道理。

10. Which kinds of knowledge and skills should universities provide has been argued for many years.

语序错误。主语从句,宾语从句都可以用疑问词what/which/ whether 等引导,但一定要记住,后边加正常语序的句子。should universities provide 语序错误,应该是which kinds of knowledge and skills universities should provide has been argued for many years,是which kinds of 引导的主语从句。

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